The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts compare the production of
electricity
(in units
) from five different fuel sources in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000. Overall
, the total electricity
production increased in both countries by the end of the period. While
Australia increased its use of coal, nuclear power became the main source of electricity
in France in the end.
Starting with Australia, the total units
produced increased from 100 in 1980 to 170 in 2000. Its use of coal increased substantially from being half of the energy sources to Correct quantifier usage
number of units
accounting
for roughly 75% of the sources used. Change the form of the verb
account
Similarly
, the electricity
produced from hydropower went up from 20 to 36 units
. Meanwhile, both natural gas and oil witnessed a significant decline from 20 and 10 units
, respectively, to 2 units
each.
In regards to France, which doubled its total units
, it started generating electricity
from nuclear power in 1980, starting with 15 units
to rise by 111 units
in 2000. Moreover
, the electricity
produced from oil increased by 5 units
, and the units
of coal used remained the same. Both natural gas and hydropower have become insignificant by 2000.Submitted by aymanshabakaa on
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