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There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a latter to your friend.Who you think would be interested to take part in it.

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Dear Aksh, I hope
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latter
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 finds you in radiant health and
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 best of spirits. I'm writing
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 letter to inform you ou that there is a handicraft
event
 coming up in my city. Gujarat handicraft clothes exhibition will be organized in the university ground, Ahmedabad on 11th July
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 2022. Which is nearest to my house and
this
event
also
 becomes the best
event
 because they may have plenty of stores and stalls over there but it'll still
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drop into the ocean. Gujarat is well known and fabulous for their handicraft like traditional wear, curtains, hand fan and a plethora
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more. You like to wear our traditional clothes. In
this
 exhibition, they represent our people's culture and traditions. At
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 we can see a number of types of sarees, footwear, jewellery and our traditional clothes. We'll meet at 11 a. m. and you must have lunch with me and my family at my home. We will go there
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 afternoon. I hope we will meet soon. Keep in touch.
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 lovingly, Khushbu
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