Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it on this

#council #road #front #house #name

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to bring your attention to a

road

which has been damaged. My name is Richa Sharma and I live in

Subhash

Correct article usage

the Subhash

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Nagar area of your constitution. My house is located in the centre of the main market of the Subhash Nagar and it is facing Gandhi

Road

This

road

has been damaged during

this

rainy season as it rained above average

this

monsoon and multiple pits have been created due to it. It has resulted in an increase in accidents. I have

also

met with an accident

last

week as my bike lost its balance and my leg has been fractured.

Additionally

, it has caused water-logging in those pits which has increased mosquitos in the area and can invite many diseases in the future. I would request you to start the repair work of the

road

at the earliest so that it will help to reduce the accidents. I hope you will take prompt action on it. Yours faithfully, Richa Sharma

Submitted by richasharma57 on Wed Jun 08 2022

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

168 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Grievance
Deterioration
Hazardous
Impede
Inconvenience
Potholes
Cracks
Collapsed
Uneven
Detour
Repair
Maintenance
Investigation
Infrastructure
Expenditure
Resolution
Improvement
Community
Resident
Safety
Convenience
Traffic congestion
Civic
Enquiry

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