Your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with, except for one thing. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: – What do you like about the uniform? – What don’t you like about the uniform? – Make suggestions how to improve the uniform.

Dear Mr Jones, I would like to inform you about our company recently introduced a uniform
scheme
to the staff which is really a wonderful
scheme
.
Firstly
, I would thank you for suggesting
this
uniform
scheme
to our senior management and implementing it successfully
this
June month. I am really happy with the way they have chosen colours
such
as a Blue shirt and Black pants is a really fabulous one. Everybody likes
this
scheme
not only for me but
also
for employees.
However
, The pockets are missing in the shirt which is really required in order to keep their important notes while working. They have to keep their phones sometimes which are essential ones. I would request you to recommend
this
suggestion to our senior management to make
this
correction and implement in the
next
month. I would
also
ask our staff to return
this
Shirt to our warehouse once they have accepted
this
decision. Looking forward to hearing from you positively Your's Sincerely, Jithendra
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