Some cultures appear to give preference to older people than younger people while other cultures seem to prefer the younger generation. Which do you think is better? Discuss including examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Some cultures appear to give preference to older
people
over younger people
while other cultures seem to prefer the younger generation. In my opinion, as I live in this
social culture, I did not agree with this
concept and I will discuss my reason in the following paragraph.
Thai social quitely
proud of the moral that good juveniles should be grateful to senior Add a verb
isquitely
wasquitely
people
. Accordingly
, Children
should feel grateful to all elderly people
beginning in a nuclear family (parents, grandparents) to the Monarchy. However
, I think this
has a lot of problems. Firstly
, Thai law acts in the civil and commercial act
in article 1453 that "Replace the word
activities
children
cannot sue parents in criminal or civil cases". However
, In real-life not all parents take care of children
with a velvet glove. Nowadays, It appears in a news as a stepfather raping children
but the mother not had action against the stepfather and not helped the daughter. Accordingly
, I found this
case children
cannot sue a mother who ignored when stepfather's breaking the law and violent her daughter. Because suing a mother is false to morals. Secondly
, This
culture makes bad elderly people
continue doing wrong things because younger children
cannot be brave to criticize and reprimand. For example
, If elderly people
governor officials want to construct this
project. Young people
who see a mistake cannot be brave to debate and a lot of projects was failed because of egotism in elderly people
.
In conclusion from my opinion, I believe this
concept that elderly peoples are smart and have experienced more than younger people
is outdated and cannot develop the country in the true ways. Accordingly
, We should respect human rights together and cancel the morals worship someone group.Submitted by first.kantapat on
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