You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my interest to stay in the college hall of residence for the

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10 days as I am very new to

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place and

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coming from a different country. As I mentioned in my application I would prefer to have a separate room which would help to study and focus more on my research-related topics. As you know, I am coming from a vegetarian family and I would prefer to have only vegan food. I have never eaten any nonvegetarian food in my entire life. Despite

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Vegan food I would like to have Milk and eggs twice daily morning at 8AM which would make me feel active and happy.

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to my separate room. I may be required to have an internet connection to do my daily research work and

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a mobile phone would be much required since it is very far away from university and I can call for someone if needed any help. During the summer, I may need to have AC if not I can adjust with an electric fan and it might be a lifesaver. I knew that mobile phone maintenance cost is very high and if there is any challenge I am happy to have at least a basic land phone in my room. I look forward to hearing your response to my request. I hope it will come soon. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

241 words

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