Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some people that the loss of endangered species and
plants
is the main environmental problem recently.While,there are some other
problems
which are more important than
this
,according to other people.Based on my perspective,there are more important environmental issues than losing
plants
and
animals
in recent years which I will discuss
abou
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about
in
this
essay. Lossing endangered
animals
and some
plants
is
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really important but
is
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not as important as some issues
such
as
air
pollution
or climate
changings
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.
Air
pollution
is
the
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problem,which has bad impacts not only on our environment but
also
it
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can cause
health
problems
.In the cities
that
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their occupants suffer from
air
pollution
, the amount of lung cancer or other
health
diseases
are
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really great in these recent years.
Also
,
air
pollution
is those
konds
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kinds
of
problems
,which
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a
soloution
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solution
for it is a big deal for each government.So, it can be the main issue of our time. Lacking
of
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especial
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animals
or
plants
is
also
important,but it is not the main one.Due to
the
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modern technologies,we can save the
animals
and
plants
that are endangered.
For instance
;
animals
breeding or captivating is one way,in which they are kept in a place in order to produce a baby under particular
circumestances
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circumstances
.So, in my point of view, the
problems
that have
soloutions
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solutions
and they have
not
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serious negative impact on humans
health
can not be the main issue. Taking everything into consideration,some people think that
lossing
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losing
particular
animals
or
plants
is
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the main environmental
peroblems
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problems
.I think that there are more important issues
such
as
air
pollution
or climate
changings
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change
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.
Moreover
, those kinds of
problems
that have not only negative impacts on our environment but
also
on our
health
can be the main issue.
Also
, there
are
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some
way
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to stop the loss of endangered species
such
as captivate breeding.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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