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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home ,leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweight the disadvantages?

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Nowadays,
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artificial intelligence has been transformed and dominated
to
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people
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 daily basis from home to office activities.
This
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the positives
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positives
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 and negatives side of
this
 topic. On the one hand,
technology
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 of information can increase productivity and reduce unnecessary things to be done. In terms of
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homework
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home work
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,
people
 are possible to do multitasking work.
For instance
,
instead
 of buying a receipt book in the bookstore, a mother
tend
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 to watch tutorial videos on how to cook certain meals while laying on her bed.
Besides
, if many big corporations utilize social
media
 to promote their products, it will increase their opportunity to reach their
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target-market
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 and high
exposures
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exposure
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of
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 countless audiences.
As a result
, their products may be sold as they expected.
On the other hand
, many
people
trapped
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on
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the
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technology
previleges
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privileges
.
Firstly
, as information network is getting happening, it may shape
people
 to become ignorant generations which has
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 impact
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 the future. As a consequence,
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hoax
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 will be massively spread in the middle of the community and produce a lot of echo-chamber
person
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.
Secondly
, if the majority of profitable
business
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businesses
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 are using to take social
media
 as their
media
 promotion, it would reduce
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 chance of live-interaction between the seller and customer. Their customer will have no experience to taste the product directly as well
as
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decrease their loyalty rate. To conclude, social
media
network
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networks
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 have many advantages like maximizing
people
's time,
however
,
it
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 should not rely on one medium,
such
 as
instagram
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 for the sake of earning profits or
to share
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 some
informations
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information
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.
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