Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

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always be neglected in school. Some people believe that should include in
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while other people believe that
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unnecessary. In my perspective, competitive
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physical and mental
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physical
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and ability. Every day
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appropriate sport can reduce some decease
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body that
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study productivity
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the lesson , they are more concentrated.
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they can get a better score.
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can improve their personal abilities,
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, organization
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and decision making. Those skills are important to them in the future.
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, Competitive
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also
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student
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mental development. It can help
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up their confidence. Confidence children seem to
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greater
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to cope with
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stress, drawback,
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and negative
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one of the most important
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to be
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, from the
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competitive
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student
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can build up the relationship between
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, teacher and parents, as they can receive the support and feel love in
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community. In
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other word,
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seem to be more willing to share and participated in some social charity. In conclusion, obviously , competitive
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are the basis for students' physical and mental
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development. The
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not relate to
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the student
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but
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schools
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to schools
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, parents and society. I strongly suggest
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schools
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should include competitive
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in their syllabus.
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