Some people prefer to raise children in the cities while others believe that children should be raised in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently, the debate on whether

raising

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kids in the urban

areas

or the

countryside

has been heated. While some people consider that higher education can be provided in the

cities

, others argue that

children

can experience a better childhood in the

countryside

. As far as I am concerned,

children

's development can be benefited by living in the

countryside

.

To begin

with, more resources can be provided to

children

in

the

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urban

areas

. As it seems the

cities

are usually more developed than the

countryside

, talents will be attracted by those good infrastructures which bring opportunities for

children

to learn different skills.

For example

, arts and piano classes can be offered in the urban

areas

which may not be

availabled

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available

in rural

areas

.

Therefore

, more skills can be learned once

children

are growing up in the

cities

,

this

can

also

bring a brighter

furture

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future

due to the various talents they owned.

On the other hand

, kids who live in the

countryside

can have more freedom. As schools in the

countryside

require less than that in the

cities

and

children

will not be forced to join some courses, they can spend more time playing or enjoying the

nature

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landscape.

For example

,

instead

of

occupied

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with homework and classes

in

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the weekends, kids can go hiking with their families and build up a stronger connection between their family

mambers

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members

.

Therefore

, mental health and physical health can be ensured as the stress

are

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being reduced once

children

stay away from the

high pressure

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vibe. In conclusion,

although

children

can learn more skills and

having

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a more

sucured

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secured

secure

future owing to the numerous

of

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resources provided in the

cities

, it will be more

beneficials

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beneficial

if the youths spend more time with their families and learn to enjoy their life.

Moreover

, the health of

children

can be

gerentee

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granted

as they carry less burden.