Some people prefer to raise children in the cities while others believe that children should be raised in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently, the debate on whether

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kids in the urban

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or the

countryside

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has been heated. While some people consider that higher education can be provided in the

cities

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, others argue that

children

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can experience a better childhood in the

countryside

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. As far as I am concerned,

children

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's development can be benefited by living in the

countryside

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.

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with, more resources can be provided to

children

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in

the

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urban

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. As it seems the

cities

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are usually more developed than the

countryside

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, talents will be attracted by those good infrastructures which bring opportunities for

children

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to learn different skills.

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, arts and piano classes can be offered in the urban

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which may not be

availabled

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available

in rural

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.

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, more skills can be learned once

children

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are growing up in the

cities

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,

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can

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bring a brighter

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future

due to the various talents they owned.

On the other hand

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, kids who live in the

countryside

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can have more freedom. As schools in the

countryside

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require less than that in the

cities

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and

children

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will not be forced to join some courses, they can spend more time playing or enjoying the

nature

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landscape.

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,

instead

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of

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with homework and classes

in

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the weekends, kids can go hiking with their families and build up a stronger connection between their family

mambers

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members

.

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, mental health and physical health can be ensured as the stress

are

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being reduced once

children

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stay away from the

high pressure

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vibe. In conclusion,

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children

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can learn more skills and

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a more

sucured

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secured

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future owing to the numerous

of

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resources provided in the

cities

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, it will be more

beneficials

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beneficial

if the youths spend more time with their families and learn to enjoy their life.

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, the health of

children

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can be

gerentee

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granted

as they carry less burden.