You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilites for shoppers could be improved. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:say in general what you like about shopping in your area, say what is wrong with the facilities, suggest how they can be improved

Dear Sir, Your newspaper has a reputation for discussing different issues related to development and advancement in the city. I hope that you would take notice of
this
particular issue as well and publish it in your newspaper in order to attract the attention of higher authorities. The issue is related to shopping in Ambala city. I like to visit and shop in the market. There is not much to complain about the prices and quality of the products sold in these shops.
Furthermore
, Each shop is easily accessible from different directions. Despite these amenities, When it comes to keeping the parking spaces in front of shops clean and tidy, it requires some improvements.
Also
, there is a need to build some rest places for older people and tired ones. These facilities will benefit the whole society.
Therefore
, I suggest shoppers should employ enough staff to keep the area clean so that it would not cause any hindrance to the people.
In addition
to it, Rest places for old and tired people should be built in order to provide them with better facilities. I hope you will publish an editorial in your esteemed newspaper regarding
this
. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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