You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. write a letter to the singer: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear Sir,
Last
weekend, I was delighted to attend your concert at
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sports club. I am going to cherish that evening forever.
Firstly
, I have always seen you perform on the television
however
seeing your live performance made me ecstatic. I am fond of your melodious voice, and you truly captivate the audience with it.
Secondly
, I admire your quirky moves while singing which makes the show pleasing and entertaining.
Lastly
, I have observed that you are never complacent with your singing and always bring new elements during each event.
Moreover
, I got goosebumps when I heard your new number with high pitch notes. I would like to share that I used to dabble in writing poems during school days, perhaps recently making enormous efforts to write regional song lyrics. As a part of your experimentation, I will appreciate
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you could sometime bring up my song on the stage because it will certainly help me
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my work to a wider public. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from you. Yours Faithfully, Devika
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