You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter - Explain your situation - Describe the problems with the house - Say what you would like to happen
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction Linking Words
towards
the Change preposition
with
apartment
which I rented recently. My name is Upasana rani and i am a tenent at Use synonyms
apartment
no 42, Basant Vihar.
I have been living here since Use synonyms
last
month with two other students who are my roommates as it is a Linking Words
specious
place to live. There, we Correct your spelling
spacious
also
have Linking Words
Correct your spelling
another
an other
spare room which can be shared with another person. Correct your spelling
another
Thus
, Linking Words
i
would request you to allow us to have a new person as one of my friends wants to shift with me. It is not only helpful to pay the expensive rent of Change the capitalization
I
Use synonyms
apartment
but Correct article usage
an apartment
also
helps me in my academic Linking Words
works
.
That being said, I would catch your attention towards many issues in Fix the agreement mistake
work
Use synonyms
apartment
which we have to face Add an article
the apartment
an apartment
everyday
. Replace the word
every day
Firstly
, some of Linking Words
doors
and window glasses are cracked and Add an article
the doors
floor
tiles of Correct article usage
the floor
bathroom
are Correct article usage
the bathroom
also
chipped. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
drainage
system does not work properly as the kitchen sink is blocked Correct article usage
the drainage
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that
is why it is stinking.
Given the situation, it would be highly appreciatable if you ask our landlord to send someone to fix all these problems because it is Correct pronoun usage
which
landlord's
accountability as per Correct article usage
the landlord's
agreement
. Correct article usage
the agreement
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otherwise
I have left with no option Add a comma
,otherwise
to
leave Correct word choice
but to
this
Linking Words
apartment
.
I hope you will understand and cooperate Use synonyms
me
in Change preposition
with me
this
regard.
Yours faithfully,
Upasana RaniLinking Words
Submitted by upasna.garg44 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite