FILM STARS AND CELEBRITIES ARE OFTEN SHARE THEIR VIEWS ON PUBLIC MATTERS THAT HAVE LITTLE TO DO WITH THEIR PROFESSION IS IT A POSITIVE OR NAGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

It is commonly seen that many
cinema
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and sports
stars
usually share their opinions on social problems with which they do not have any concern.
However
, there are certain positives of
this
development, I believe that it has far more negatives.
To begin
with the positives of sharing views on public issues. Celebrities, indeed,
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important part of
society
who have a great impact on their followers. They can positively influence their fans and make them aware
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any societal problems, in
this
way, they can assist to eradicate social problems.
For instance
, Bollywood star Akshay Kumar is renowned for his social awareness campaigns
such
as his movie Toilet-Ek prem
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was a sarcastic comedy which was
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great support for
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state’s movement Swach Bharat Abhiyan.
Consequently
, celebrities are the
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who can lead
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society
on the path of positivity and prosperity. Despite the
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positives, it has certain dismal consequences on both
society
and
stars
.
First
and foremost, if these
stars
share their opinions publically without exactly knowing the matter, the situation may go worse.
This
is because it leads to the young people who are blind followers on the wrong path and mislead them.
This
may result in some serious repercussions
such
as
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the violence and riots.
Secondly
,
this
kind of
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can
also
spoil the public image of a star and can have a negative impact on their stardom. Kangna
Ranuat
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Ranaut
,
for example
, gave many controversial statements
for
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the farmer protester
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months ago,
that
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created a negative image of
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filmy actress and she had to face
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huge criticism for
this
. In conclusion,
although
awaking public about social issues is a moral responsibility of the
stars
as they are role
model
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models
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and the source of inspiration for many yet I believe if they make these public statements only for controversy, it has adverse effects on
society
.
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