Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children

Television

has become modern media in

this

present era. As

compare

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to the past,

children

are more used to

TV

than outdoor activities. Before they would play with friends in

garden

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or playground, and be attached to the environment. But nowadays, life without

television

is not predictable. Within a ,switch we can observe the world around us.

Instead

of playing outside,

children

are more comfortable with

TV

. From their childhood itself, they are convenient with it. Looking at the bright side, it is a fact that,

TV

is an entertainment box with one’s complete ease.

Children

in their leisure time give priority to

TV

.

Hence

, it has many programs like “Dance India Dance”, India Got Talent” etc. through which

children

could get

chance

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to show their talent worldwide. A cartoon is

the

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favourite show for all kids, and it has

distinct

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character

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to whom they are addicted too much. Apart from all, sports channels are

also

one of the most liked by them. IPL which is held every year

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puts their interest towards crickets and

are

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inspired by the cricketers like Dhoni, Kholi etc. who play really very well. No doubt,

children

spent more time watching

television

, as compared to they did in the past. Sitting in front of

TV

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the TV

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for hours has spoilt their health

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like they have become

Victim

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of obesity, weak vision and inactive. Outside creativity

are

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ignored and

influence

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of

TV

has increased.

This

ultimately affects their educational qualities. To conclude,

television

should be utilized for

limited

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period

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so that one can spare time for other activities, which are

also

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significant part of their life.

Children

must give

first

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privilege to their educational field.

Television

is

boon

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of

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science, but if it is used in excess it may become

curse

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a curse

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