Write a letter to a friend who worked at your previous company. You have moved to a new job in a new city. • describe your city • describe your job • describe the arrangements for him to visit you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....,

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Dear
sam
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, I hope will you and your family are well. I recently moved the
mumbai
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Mumbai
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city
for my
job related
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.it is
very
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beautiful
city
and
lot
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a lot
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of facilities
available
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are available
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in
this
location l really like
this
place And other things that
company
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the company
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provide me room in the
plazza
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plaza
of
mumbai
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.
Moreover
, it is
very
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better job rather than
previous
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because
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one because
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lot
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of things
provide
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by
company
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transport systems and room rental
also
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are also
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free and
i
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was
duty
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on Monday to Friday 8
hour
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every day
i
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was doing
job
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of
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at
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Mumbai
Dubai
mubai
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the mubai
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metro station.
Furthermore
,
i
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am waiting for you very long time . I am arranging your room and all the facilities because we set together and enjoy
our self
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ourselves
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and we will
going
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all the
city
trip . And knowledge about all the
city
information. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thankyou
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,
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Your
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sincerely, Dharma
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