Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?

The debate surrounding the

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between money and happiness polarizes crowds.

Nonetheless

, the rate of

depressions

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among VIPs has been drastically increasing. In light of the above, I strongly believe that in the pursuit of a longer, happier and

healtier

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healthier

life, money concerns just a tiny fraction of the puzzle.

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is why

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many celebrities suffer from

this

condition which does not represent a

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compromise.

To begin

with, a luxurious lifestyle,

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sponsorships

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and

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VIP treatments are the dreams of each human being.

However

, most of the time behind these benefits are hidden several drawbacks.

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people will be your friends just for convenience and the loneliness will spread. Emblematic is the example of Robin Williams, a widely popular actor in Hollywood.

Although

he had earned millions of dollars, he

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due to depression and solitude.

Therefore

, I am thoroughly convinced that money and happiness cannot be correlated.

In addition

, there are many examples of people who regret their simple lives. Being loved by your relatives and your friends concerns something that cannot be purchased.

For example

, celebrities have highlighted in many interviews that the price of success is a doubled

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. On the one hand, it allows you to have astronomically high incomes.

On the other hand

, it alienates

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reality which could be potentially hazardous for your mental health. For these reasons, I condemn the hidden side of success and I consider it blatantly unfair and not worthed. To conclude, I

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with the statement which

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that many celebrities have unhappy lives due to their popularity. In fact, they attract many fake friends and most of them can suffer from depression and alienation which are not the right prices to pay.

Hence

, living a simple life and being heartened by the people close to you cannot be compared to any other lifestyle.