In many countries, mainly tourist, but not local people visit museums and local sites, why does this happen, and what can be done to attract more people to visit these places?

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In many
countries
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,most of the visitors to the historical and local
places
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are
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countries
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and not local
people
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.
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curiorsity
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curiosity
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forces
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force
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for the tourist to
visit
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these sites, and how adding new recreation
places
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will motivate the local
people
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to
visit
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these
places
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.
People
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visit
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other
countries
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to learn their history and cultures
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not in their book. They get curious about the way
people
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lived in other
countries
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and the best way for them to learn about it is through historical
places
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and
museum
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museums
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.
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, local
people
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have
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already
know
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about them having lived
them
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with them
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and learnt it from their school.
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they find no interest in visiting these
places
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.
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, the entry fees are usually
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at
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rate which can be expensive for the local
people
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to afford.
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from
Maldives
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the Maldives
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, about 60
percent
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of the visitor to their beach are foreign, and the studies found that the reason that there are
less
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fewer
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local
people
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is that the prices are too high for the local
people
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to
visit
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One way to attract more local
vistors
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visitors
is to build more recreational spaces in the historical
places
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to keep them interested. Local
people
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will become more curious about the new
places
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and will
visit
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them.
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, giving entry
discount
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discounts
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to the local
people
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will encourage them to
visit
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these
places
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.
For example
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,
Dubai
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the Dubai
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government built the largest expo in the world which include all sort of entertainment and history and it is free of cost for the local
people
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, it became very successful
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quickly
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as local
people
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from all over the country still
visit
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to
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this
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day. In conclusion, there should be more recreational spaces and entry fees discount for the local
people
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to motivate them to
visit
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the historical
places
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.
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