Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

In today's modern society, people have raised their living standards by enjoying many experiences in life.

As a result

, the demand for travelling triggers the

tourism

industry growth in many countries which are developing.

Therefore

,

this

essay will discuss the reasons and some positive aspects accompanied by negative ones. There are two main reasons why there is a steep growth in

this

field. First of all,

tourism

is one of the best ways to increase the income of that country.

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to

many

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activities visitors have participated in

such

as renting hotels, eating, purchasing souvenirs, etc, local citizens have a chance to earn their living and gain some benefits.

Moreover

, travelling will help these countries push out their reputations all over the world. Ha Long Bay,

for example

, a breathtakingly beautiful natural landscape which was

rewarded

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by UNESCO helps the fames of Vietnam cross the ocean, attracting more and more travellers

coming

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to see

this

wonder with their own eyes. Despite the merits of

tourism

, there are some drawbacks that should be addressed.

To begin

with, the more people visit, the more polluted that area is. Dalat city,

for instance

, used to have a clean public square which is now filled with a ton of garbage after some special attractive events and occasions

such

as the Flowers Festival or even weekends.

In addition

,

tourism

directly affects the natural habitat as well. To burgeon the

tourism

rate, many amenities

which are

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served

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serve

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human demands are builts,

demolishing

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and demolishing

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animal species' homeland. In conclusion, the growth of the

tourism

industry will more or less bring many benefits to developing countries,

however

, there are some ongoing drawbacks that these governments should rectify to have a substantial improvement.