nowadays, people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurant. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

It is certain that many environmentalists of today have argued that the majority of
people
simply do not care enough about the issues plaguing our
environment
.Unfortunately, many
people
still do not take
this
imminent threat seriously enough and many still treat it as a trivial matter.
This
essay will be used to explain and outline the reasons for
this
kind of
behavior
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behaviour
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.
First
of all, it is commonly believed that many
people
do not care because it does not affect their daily
life
.
This
is
,
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apply
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because generally, many
people
are still not informed about
phenomenons
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such
as global warming, climate change, pollution and much more.
However
, these crises have gradual effects which can only be seen much later on in history.
Therefore
, direct effects have minimal if not zero impact on a person’s daily
life
.
For instance
, healthcare and welfare
is
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are
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something that everyone cares about because it directly affects many peoples’ lives and livelihoods, but in
the environments case
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the case of the environment
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it is ignored because
it’s
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its
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direct effects are less visible to the naked eye.So, despite the threat global warming and many other environmental crises hold, many peoples’ knowledge of the matter is limited due to
it’s
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its
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non-existent impact on daily
life
.
Secondly
, it is due to the severe lack of information on the relevant
topic
.Many news outlets and government departments are much more focused on economic issues like the rising gas prices, GDP growth or social issues
such
as gay marriage,
feminism
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and feminism
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to properly deal with the looming threat of climate change.
Therefore
,
this
causes
people
to only care about those topics which the media reports and not the
environment
.
For example
, no matter how pointless the
topic
at hand is if reported by the mass media enough it will eventually snowball into a
topic
cares about while topics they don’t report on
such
as the environmental crisis are left forgotten,
this
causes a fundamental lack of information on the
topic
with the public.
Consequently
,
this
causes many
peoples’
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knowledge of the
topic
to be shallow. To summarize
it
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, many
people
do not give the
environment
the attention it needs.Their needed attention is directed towards much less important topics by the media and government agencies and they
much
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prioritize daily
life
obstacles over the
environment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • food waste
  • overbuying
  • portion sizes
  • expiration dates
  • meal planning
  • food preservation
  • cultural norms
  • social norms
  • storage techniques
  • distribution systems
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