Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old houses in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own style. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent decades, our world has become modernized and industrialized. That leads to many negative environmental problems. I totally agree that even though the environment is polluted, most
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people
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it and they usually think that they have a lot of time so protective actions are not widely carried out.
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people
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