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The bar chart presents data on the origin of films which were screened in
Australia
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 and the UK in 2001 while the line graph compares the number of cinema attendants in these two countries between 1976 and 2006.  Overall,
Australian
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 and
British
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theatres
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 were dominated by American
movies
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 during the period, and more
British
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 went to movie
theatres
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 than their
Australian
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 counterparts between 1976 and 2005.    As the data suggests, more than 75%
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movies
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of movies
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 that were released in the UK
theatres
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 in 2001 were produced in the USA while 20% were locally made.
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, almost one in ten
movies
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 screened in the UK was produced in
Australia
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. A similar movie screening trend could be observed in
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this
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 year where American
movies
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 commanded the
theatres
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 with a 65% ratio. Australians could watch fewer UK-made
movies
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 as only one in twenty
British
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 films made it to
Australian
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 halls. Interestingly, locally produced films in
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 were ignorable in percentage - as their screening ratio suggests. It is obvious that more Brits enjoyed cinemas in a theatre than Australians did between 1976 and 2005. In 1975, over 100
million
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British
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 watched
movies
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 in halls while
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 was just around 30
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 in
Australia
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. With some fluctuations,
Australian
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 movie-goers' number reached over 80
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 after 3 decades.
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,
British
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 cinema attendees dropped from 1977 to 1984, but afterwards steadily went up with some minor vacillations. After 30 years, almost 160
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British
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 went to cinema halls- almost double
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that of Australians.
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