More and more prisons are being built to house the world's criminals, and many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem. However, others feel that psychological assistance is what is required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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, and many hackers are growing these days, with some
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these teenagers how to steal a bank? for something, that reason makes
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are growing. The question is more and more imprisons are existing built to
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criminals
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, and many
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prison is the answer to solve the crimes issue.
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, others feel that
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help is what is
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my opinion. In terms of causes, we live with
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communties
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are so afraid
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in
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matter
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trouble. The main reason given to support
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claim is that
such
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as United State the rate of
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criminals
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are
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70% per cent per day which is are
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in the world.
In
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are living in United State? the
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go home after 8:00 pm which is prevent the criminal to do something to society. ,
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, societies are living
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for a long time.
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is makes
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some societies
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hate United
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some the
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communties
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US
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are improving more and more. We should hide
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, these apps, and
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concerning hacks. We should government do something about
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