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Plagiarism in all kinds of writing is becoming more frequent. Why is this happening? What should be done to solve the problem?

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Plagiarism
 is more and more rampant in the school setting. Some people attribute
this
 problem to the evolving digital technology while others believe
such
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 result of the growing pressure upon the young generation. In
this
 essay, I will explain the reason for the increasing number of
plagiarism
 practices and their solutions. Admittedly, the development of digital technology is the main culprit of cheating behaviours. People who are aiming for better academic results with inappropriate approaches will resort to digital
devices
 since it is becoming more intelligent and easy to carry
with
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.
For instance
,
smart watches
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 and AirPods enable people to surf the internet and communicate more secretively with their small screens. Many dishonest students decided to utilise the loophole by sneaking into venues with these smart
devices
.
This
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persistent phenomenon unless examiners can come up with practical solutions to curb the use of digital
devices
 during the exams. To solve
this
 problem, there are a couple of actions to take.
Firstly
,
examination
 centres are highly recommended to adopt and install digital device detecters. Participants will be required to undergo security examinations before they enter
examination
 venues.
Such
 a strategy can effectively deter candidates carry smart
devices
 with them.
Secondly
, instructions should be provided to
examination
 attendants in a clear way. At the same time, penalties should be highlighted and warnings should be given to offenders. It is necessary to conduct a zero-tolerance tolerance policy
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plagiarism
 behaviours. In conclusion, I believe the growing number of cheating behaviours are the result of smart portable
devices
. Security checks and reading
examination
 guidelines in front of participants are approaches to take to combat
plagiarism
.
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