Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation. In your letter, you should: • tell when and where the presentation will deliver • describe your arrangements • say him/her what equipment you need.

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Dear John, I am writing to request a favour to help me install the electronic instrument for my presentation the
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week. I hope you are doing well. As you already know, my project had been finalized for an environmental exhibition the prior month, and I have been practising
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my presentation to make it perfect since
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. The company has published the exhibition date as 25 June at 11 am, which is the following Monday, and the venue is 7 Confederation Hall, Toronto, M2N 7X9. I have shared the list of electronic gadgets which I will need for the demonstration on that day, and the company's management has assured me that these instruments will be available two hours before the commencement of the event. It will be great if you can attend the session, and in fact, I require your help in setting up the wireless microphone which you have, since the company will be providing the wired one, which is quite uncomfortable to use, and speak and move around the big display screen at the same time. Please let me know whether you can make it before
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hour event starts. I am looking ahead to your help on the exhibition day. Yours Sincerely, Mak
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