In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
I disagree with
this
statement. I think every media
has their
own segmentation even Correct pronoun usage
its
though
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whether
that is
a conventional media
or a new media
. Newspaper
has their own segmentation, the segment of Add an article
The newspaper
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the news
news paper
is the person who is more detailed oriented and likes to read Correct your spelling
newspaper
an
in-depth writing about some case. based on the communication theory that I had learned before in my Remove the article
apply
bachelor
degree the segment of Change noun form
bachelor's
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the news
news paper
is an adult in the class of high class usually Correct your spelling
newspaper
they
work as an Entrepreneur or a part of the board of director in a company. I think people still read Correct pronoun usage
apply
Add an article
the newspaper
a newspaper
newspaper
because they thought Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
it
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they
more
credible than the online Add a missing verb
was more
media
. newspaper
is written by the certified journalist who knows the ethics on
journalism they will always only share the fact for their Change preposition
of
news
. in the
online Correct article usage
apply
media
there are many Add a comma
,media
contributor
to write the Change to a plural noun
contributors
news
even though the spread news
in online Change preposition
of news
media
are
fast for me personally I have a doubt when reading Change the verb form
is
an online
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online news
a piece of online news
news
. I am doubt
Change the verb form
doubt
with
the credibility of the contributors and Change preposition
apply
also
the validation of the news
. another reason why I disagree with the statement above is Replace the word
that
because
the health consideration. sometimes people more easily Add the preposition
ofbecause
to
get tired when reading online (Fix the infinitive
apply
book
/newspaper
). personally
I like to read a printed Add a comma
,personally
book
because I can maximize learned from that book
. I can take a
notes directly especially when the Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
book
is in English
language. sometimes when I read a Change the article
the English
book
online there are many
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much
distraction
from my Change to a plural noun
distractions
phone
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phones
such
as social media
notification and etc. there are many
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much
reason
why people will still Change to a plural noun
reasons
buying
a printed Wrong verb form
buy
book
or newspaper
it just depend
on the needs of each Change the verb form
depends
Correct your spelling
customer
costumer
.Correct your spelling
customer
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite