you have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six month and look after their six-yeras-old child. write a letter to the parents.In your letter explan why you would like the job give ditails of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Astralia

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Dear sir and madam, I hope

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letter finds you well.I am writing

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letter to tell you I am ready to take

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job because I think

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job is extremely appropriate for me

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, I believe

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situation is fully helping me to find myself and after ,that the reason for

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is I am having some important work to do so I have decided to get

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work. If you let me I want to give some information about myself and

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I have a lot of free time to keep your children and ,

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I have must energetic because I am just 25 years old

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, I have related work experience.

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day I am going to the gym and

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I prefer to go to the swimming pool if I can and after doing an exercise I always stay at home and study books. Do let me know at the earliest possible convenience. writing for your reply. Yours faithfully. Saeed foroghi nia

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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The Greeting

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