you have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six month and look after their six-yeras-old child. write a letter to the parents.In your letter explan why you would like the job give ditails of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Astralia

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Dear sir and madam, I hope

this

letter finds you well.I am writing

this

letter to tell you I am ready to take

this

job because I think

this

job is extremely appropriate for me

in addition

, I believe

this

situation is fully helping me to find myself and after ,that the reason for

this

is I am having some important work to do so I have decided to get

this

work. If you let me I want to give some information about myself and

firstly

I have a lot of free time to keep your children and ,

second

I have must energetic because I am just 25 years old

However

, I have related work experience.

This

day I am going to the gym and

although

I prefer to go to the swimming pool if I can and after doing an exercise I always stay at home and study books. Do let me know at the earliest possible convenience. writing for your reply. Yours faithfully. Saeed foroghi nia

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

168 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

Because of the negative effects on health of an inactive lifestyle, all university students and school children should be forced to do sports activities at least 3 times per week. Do you agree?

in some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantagges and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Virtual reality be used as a tool for therapeutic interventions and mental health treatments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter  suggest a suitable date and time for the party  recommend a venue  propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing bricks from clay for the building industry.