In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest

Nowadays, some schools have hard issues with communication with each other and the students in the global. The main problem of
this
causes can be irresponsible
parents
and the possible solution would be
psychologist
advice.
This
essay intends to discuss not only the dilemma but
also
the best way to solve it. The primary difficulty is that most of the
parents
are busy all the time without time to spend with their young ones to talk to some specific and their behaviour things which means they suppose their kids want to just need wealth life.
This
is because their kids seem lonely without someone
next
to them.
As a result
, it must be much more harassment of the youngsters for some the discrimination and bullying of some of the other children.
One
of the perfect examples of
this
in Sydney during the ester celebrating show several of the youngster guys between 14-17years old boys fighting each other and
also
stabbing each other so the result is the
one
16 years old boy poor died that situation is the who stabbed that boy run away among millions of people. The criminal
wasboy
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was boy
young as
young as
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the witness. The criminal boy was approved without any love and care from their
parents
by the police. In order to solve these ,matters the school directors and teachers should be adding their lesson
psychologist
one
day a week for their all students.
That is
to say that every single school student has any problems
such
as arguing with friend and family and their love story etc.
Consequently
, young ones discuss
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and
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share their secret thing with their
psychologist
.
One
particularly good example of
this
is in the Netflix series of the name Sex Education which series among the school kids face some sex issue and how to do it.
One
guy gave some reasonable advice to students like a
psychologist
's advice.
That Is
why every single student became without any problem and they are perfectly behaviour for themselves. By way of the conclusion, I once restate my view that ever there are some problems related to lack of care like irresponsible
parents
or their care people it can be easily addressed through discussion with the majority.
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