Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a forerign language in primary school rather than secondary school do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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argue it is more beneficial to learn a new
language
in elementary
school
instead
of high
school
.
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agrees that the drawbacks of
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taught another
language
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supersedes
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reasons that would be explained in
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paragraphs.
To begin
, starting off
foreign
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language
in primary
school
would be cumbersome.
This
is because there are other complex core subjects
such
as mathematics,science,
health
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education they are learning at
this
stage,
therefore
including another subject would result in poor academic performance.
In addition
,some pupils might develop phonological interference in the process and slow down their speech.The reason is at
this
stage,they are trying to speak their mother tongue flawlessly.These pupils
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up mixing up
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of words.
for example
a
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child
is
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mixes up the pronunciation of words like lice for rice,
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river
liver
for fever.
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it is necessary it is included
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the secondary curriculum.
However
, during
this
age and stage in the development of a child,the brain is very much receptive to
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new things and a
second
language
is not excluded.
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their interest
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learning is at its peak.
For instance
, in Nigeria recently most private schools included
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language
to
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their academic scheme and before their graduation they are able to speak french fluently.
As a
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they can easily communicate with
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the french
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speaking
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. In conclusion,
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believe that the demerits of teaching a
second
language
in elementary
school
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surpasses
super passes
the merits,
thus
it should be discouraged.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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