Some people think that couples should live together before getting married to start knowing each other better and see if they are compatible. Others say that because of this tendency people become immoral and only deep emotional attachment makes a durable alliance. What is your opinion?

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concern. While some

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approach promotes compatibility discovery, others are of the opinion that it encourages immorality and weak bond. I agree with the

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some reasons

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as : Living together does not create room for building strong emotional connections, it promotes the

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of STIs/ HIV and

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it encourages immoral

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in the society.

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, when Lovers Cohabits before their

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they may not have the ample opportunity to build strong intimacy which is required for a lasting

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, living together before

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increases the chances of early divorce and

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could be attributed to the fact that quality relationships and friendship

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better built when

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are living apart because

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breeds contempt . A survey done in Nigeria has revealed that the chances of divorce

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higher among couples that Cohabited before they got married

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another negative effect of living together before

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is that it promotes immorality.

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means that when the opposite sex stays together in a house, they most likely may engage in premarital sex which is one of the social vices in the society so it is better they live apart until they are officially wedded.

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can promote the

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of sexually transmitted diseases and HIV as most

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rarely go for medical

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and investigations once they start living together and may not

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be able to

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safe sex.

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implies that the

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may be notably high among Cohabiting couples and the evidence could be seen in surveys which stated that

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more among partners

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cohabited before

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. In conclusion, though some

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believe that the act of living together

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couples before their official wedding encourages compatibility discovery, I am of the opinion that cohabitation does not give room for building strong intimacy

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divorce is inevitable, it

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promotes immoral

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in the society and could as well lead to

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in the

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of HIV and other sexually transmitted diseases and so should be discouraged.