Some people think that couples should live together before getting married to start knowing each other better and see if they are compatible. Others say that because of this tendency people become immoral and only deep emotional attachment makes a durable alliance. What is your opinion?
In recent times, the idea of cohabitation by partners before
marriage
have
become an issue of Change the verb form
has
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widespread
wide
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widespread
spread
concern. While some people
believe that this
approach promotes compatibility discovery, others are of the opinion that it encourages immorality and weak bond. I agree with the Correct your spelling
latter
later
view because Correct your spelling
latter
of
some reasons Change preposition
for
such
as : Living together does not create room for building strong emotional connections, it promotes the spread
of STIs/ HIV and also
it encourages immoral practice
in the society.
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practices
Firstly
, when Lovers Cohabits before their marriage
they may not have the ample opportunity to build strong intimacy which is required for a lasting marriage
. In other words
, living together before marriage
increases the chances of early divorce and this
could be attributed to the fact that quality relationships and friendship is
better built when Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
are living apart because over familiarity
breeds contempt . A survey done in Nigeria has revealed that the chances of divorce Add a hyphen
over-familiarity
is
higher among couples that Cohabited before they got married Change the verb form
are
also
another negative effect of living together before marriage
is that it promotes immorality. This
means that when the opposite sex stays together in a house, they most likely may engage in premarital sex which is one of the social vices in the society so it is better they live apart until they are officially wedded.
Moreover
, this
practice
can promote the spread
of sexually transmitted diseases and HIV as most people
rarely go for medical test
and investigations once they start living together and may not Fix the agreement mistake
tests
also
be able to practice
safe sex. This
implies that the spread
of Replace the word
sexually
sexual
transmitted Change the adjective
sexually
disease
may be notably high among Cohabiting couples and the evidence could be seen in surveys which stated that Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
these
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this
disease
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diseases
spread
is
more among partners Unnecessary verb
apply
which
cohabited before Correct pronoun usage
who
marriage
.
In conclusion, though some people
believe that the act of living together of
couples before their official wedding encourages compatibility discovery, I am of the opinion that cohabitation does not give room for building strong intimacy Change preposition
apply
hence
divorce is inevitable, it also
promotes immoral practice
in the society and could as well lead to increase
in the Change the verb form
increasing
spread
of HIV and other sexually transmitted diseases and so should be discouraged.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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