In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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is a positive development,as it encourages saving and limits overcrowding. The following paragraphs will elucidate the given points. In some nations,

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majority of their populace believe that possession of

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to set a goal to achieve,and

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a source of income, which is the most significant stage of planning. The range of processes involved in setting a goal

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a given task, which

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accomplished, gives

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feeling of actualisation. Abraham

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hierarchy of needs, notes several stages of need which

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acquiring a home is of a positive note, as

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would reduce overpopulation in a given set. It is believed that prior to

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environmental protective body.

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the pattern and location at which buildings are located, us to prevent illegal constructions, planned city arrangements, thereby reducing overcrowding.

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can channel to renting of

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property,

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