You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Write at least 150 words.

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Dear

Ms.

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Snyder, I am writing

this

letter in regards to asking for a time off. During my time off, I have planned to travel to India for my brother's wedding ceremony at the end of

this

year. I have scheduled my travel from 10th December 2022 to 18th December 2022. I will be

unavailble

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unavailable

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on the mentioned dates at work. In order to prepare for my absence, I have created an

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document where I have assigned tasks to my colleagues at work that are willing to cover for me during my leave of absence. Another document that I have put together has all the important tasks that I am planning to complete before I leave for my vacation.

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result

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the

worlk

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work

world

flow will not be hampered.

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I will be available over my phone if an urgency occurs and anyone from work needs to reach out to me. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours Sincerely, Harshali Mohite

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