Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

The garbage
producation
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production
is
incerasing
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increasing
continuously with
industrial
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revolution and technological development.
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essay will discuss
about
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effect
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the effect
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of industrialization on
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the eco-system
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eco-system
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and
also
suggest regulations to be imposed by
government
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the government
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to minimise
wastes
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. The million tons
waste
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of waste
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produced in industries
everyday
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are
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being dumped in the environment. The reason behind
this
is
usage
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of cheap
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raw
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row
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materials to reduce the manufacturing cost and increase profit margin. The manufacturing facilities shall be regulated by
dedicated
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government team with stringent factory acts on
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materials being consumed. In developing countries, massive waste generation became a by-product of
industrial
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revolution. The easily available
non standard
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row
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material used in the factory
produce
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produces
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more garbage. The use of impure coal in power
plant
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plants
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creates more
amount
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amounts
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of ass and
smokes
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which led higher air pollution.
Moreover
, the calorific value of non-standard coal is quite lesser as
compare
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to petroleum coal.
Similarly
, the use of
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single use
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plastic
produce
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more rubbish which can not
be recycle
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be recycled
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or reuse as well. The rubbish dumped in
sea
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the sea
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and on land has impacted severely on
life
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cycle of animals and fishes. The impact on human life due to pollution is irreversible. Several dishes
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spread
spreaded
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spread
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due to pollution.
This
essay has discussed, the causes and solutions to avoid the rubbish.
Also
, suggested the steps
to
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be taken by
government
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the government
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to control the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • landfill
  • recycle
  • single-use products
  • waste management
  • regulatory measures
  • composting
  • biodegradable
  • environmental impact
  • incentives
  • sustainable practices
  • circular economy
  • zero waste
  • responsibility
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