There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere.

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existed Globally and has played an important role in our life. Some people are of the opinion that local
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of a nation is more essential when compared with western
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that is
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being heard all over and I totally agree with
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notion as it propagates culture and
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the history of a country. On one hand,
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is being defined by some scholars as a medicine
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the soul. It plays an important role in relaxing the mind and can
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depression.
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temporary relief from his ailment as he shows
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signs of being elevated in his mood after listening to
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according to research carried out by
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students in
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hospital Nawfia.
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,
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serves as a diversional therapy for a patient or a person
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experiencing excruciating pain, during listening to
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,the nerves are calmed thereby taking away the feeling of pain momentarily.
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, the history of a country can
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be maintained through
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, because it never dies. Any information that was passed through
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,tends to live on
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the history of the country
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when it is propagated through
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. To conclude,
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has played an important role in our lives,I believe that local
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are
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more beneficial when compared to western
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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