You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, you have had a wonderful time. You have promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. Write a letter to your travel agent as promised, and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kajol Dave. I have promised to write

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about the trip recommended by you, the overall experience was so good. Well, I visited the Rajasthan for five days by Patel Tours and Travels Pvt Ltd. The hotel you booked for me provided a good pick-up service from the Bus station. During the daytime, I roam around the nearest places which are Udaipur and Jaisalmer, and

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visited the local market to become familiar with the traditional culture of the place and eat special food is “Dal-Bati” and the taste is delicious. I bought some traditional clothes,

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and handmade items from Udaipur. I have

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visited the zoo, waterfalls, and nearest park to enjoy the holidays and will visit the Ambaji temple before the holidays end. The holiday destination was excellent and If I get a chance in the future, I would like to go to

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place again. Yours sincerely, K. R. Dave

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

161 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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