You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, you have had a wonderful time. You have promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. Write a letter to your travel agent as promised, and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kajol Dave. I have promised to write
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about the trip recommended by you, the overall experience was so good. Well, I visited the Rajasthan for five days by Patel Tours and Travels Pvt Ltd. The hotel you booked for me provided a good pick-up service from the Bus station. During the daytime, I roam around the nearest places which are Udaipur and Jaisalmer, and
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visited the local market to become familiar with the traditional culture of the place and eat special food is “Dal-Bati” and the taste is delicious. I bought some traditional clothes,
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and handmade items from Udaipur. I have
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visited the zoo, waterfalls, and nearest park to enjoy the holidays and will visit the Ambaji temple before the holidays end. The holiday destination was excellent and If I get a chance in the future, I would like to go to
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place again. Yours sincerely, K. R. Dave
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