Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Living in strange a
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other than your own,
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where speaking
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a foreign
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language
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is needed can cause basic
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living in a foreign destination
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requires having good knowledge
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language
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of
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ability can have serious consequences
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inability
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in having
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reaction when a disaster in
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. Maybe , daily routine activities can be handled without knowing
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language
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but , in some serious
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it can be a cause of
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the disaster
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.
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happened occurs
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an information
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good
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vocabulary circle. And , misunderstanding about
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person can be the
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for lost loss
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life. So , it is of prominent importance to
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at least essential words of
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language
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is a socialize social creature and needs to have communication
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meet
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demands.
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, people need careers to receive
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and
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any job has its rules own laws and require special contact so , being able in communicating is a basic requirement of finding
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a job
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to speak in
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a foreign
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country
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can be the reason
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being homesick and
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. The
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will deteriorate when
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find
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himself
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helpless with doing simple things
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opening a
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account when he does not know
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language
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, for an emigrate immigrant speaking
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language
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is a necessity in any passage of life. 109 To sum up, lack of good proper knowledge of
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a foreign
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language
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can be the main reason
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many
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in
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overseas. To address the issues and prevent
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later
problems
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individuals must learn
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language
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a language
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before emigrating.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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