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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
Living in strange a
country
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a country
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 where speaking
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 is needed can cause basic
problems
,
in addition
 to, functional
problems
. There is no doubt that
,
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 living in a foreign destination
country
 requires having good knowledge
about
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of
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language
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the language
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 because,
lack
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a lack
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 of
such
 ability can have serious consequences
such
 as
,
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inability
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an inability
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 in having
appropriate
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an appropriate
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 reaction when a disaster in
happeningstrikes
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happening strikes
. Maybe , daily routine activities can be handled without knowing
language
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the language
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 but , in some serious
situations
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,situations
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 it can be a cause of
disaster
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the disaster
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.
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, when an accident is
happenedoccurs
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happened occurs
 and a person is injured calling A&E can be vital, so, giving the address of the location
in addition
giving
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an information
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information
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 about conditions need
having
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good
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a good
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 vocabulary circle. And , misunderstanding about
location
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the location
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 and situation of
injured
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an injured
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 person can be the
reasons
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reason
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 for lost loss
a
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life. So , it is of prominent importance to
learning
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learn
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 at least essential words of
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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Moreover
,
humanbeingse
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human beings
 is a socialize social creature and needs to have communication
for
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to
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 meet
his
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their
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 demands.
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, people need careers to receive
incomes
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income
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 and
obviously
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 any job has its rules own laws and require special contact so , being able in communicating is a basic requirement of finding
job
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a job
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.
In addition
,
inability
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the inability
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 to speak in
foreign
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a foreign
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country
 can be the reason
of
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for
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 being homesick and
depressed
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. The
situationThis
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situation this
situations
 will deteriorate when
immigrant
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an immigrant
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find
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himself
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themselves
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 helpless with doing simple things
such
 as
,
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opening a
back
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bank
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 account when he does not know
language
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the language
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 .
As a result
, for an emigrate immigrant speaking
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 is a necessity in any passage of life. 109 To sum up, lack of good proper knowledge of
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 can be the main reason
of
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for
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 many
problems
in
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overseas. To address the issues and prevent
from
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later
problems
 individuals must learn
language
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a language
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 before emigrating.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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