In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Advanced and progressive system in farming is being grown. Even though ,yet, inhabitants of some countries around the world suffer from
food
deprivation. Use synonyms
That is
for many reasons Linking Words
such
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sudden
increase in dwellers throughout the world and farmland Correct article usage
the sudden
are
not enough to satisfy people's Correct subject-verb agreement
is
food
demand. 47
Starvation has always Use synonyms
was
sparked Wrong verb form
been
off
considerable debate by those who are under occupation Around that. Meanwhile ,two major problems are being spread encountered concerned with going Hungry.Change preposition
apply
First
,in Linking Words
developed
society
they always focus on their own country's progress in every Add an article
a developed
the developed
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and Change to a singular noun
field
thus
, we can see extravagant sources which could be allocated to the communities Where Linking Words
,
living in poverty.Remove the comma
apply
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such
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a
wasteful use of natural sources like water in Correct article usage
the
advanced
society . So it can bother other Add an article
an advanced
civilization
living suitably. Fix the agreement mistake
civilizations
Second
, Linking Words
agriculture
land under cultivation Replace the word
agricultural
are
faced with limitation due to population Change the verb form
is
inlargment
growth and their demand for Correct your spelling
enlargement
food
.
Now, two major problems for Use synonyms
food
deprivation as mentioned above have to Use synonyms
considered
by Political will , government co-operation and Add a missing verb
be considered
likewise
people. Linking Words
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of all, authorities' Linking Words
Announcement
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Announcements
around
starvation in countries must appear forcefully. It means Change preposition
about
thatin
other words, Correct your spelling
that in
that
,
launching Change the punctuation
apply
campaign
for Add an article
a campaign
this
problem means Linking Words
lack
of Correct article usage
the lack
food
in some parts of the world, creating Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a hashtag
hashtag
with Fix the agreement mistake
hashtags
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topic Linking Words
in
their social media, or rising raising public awareness by giving Change preposition
on
lecture
concerned with Fix the agreement mistake
lectures
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food
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the food
problem
in both schools and Universities. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Moreover
, land under cultivation as Linking Words
it
mentioned previously Correct pronoun usage
apply
are
encountered Unnecessary verb
apply
restriction
on Fix the agreement mistake
restrictions
Add an article
the crop
crop
. Fix the agreement mistake
crops
Although
, a good proposal could be submitted in Linking Words
Near
future as vertical farming. Which is the Correct article usage
the Near
the
practice of growing Remove the redundancy
apply
crop
in vertically stacked layers. With Fix the agreement mistake
crops
this
method, we expect increasing crop yields which Linking Words
is
accompanied Change the verb form
are
with
by a smaller unit area of land requirement. And Change preposition
apply
therefore
, it results in more Linking Words
food
and production.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
we can deal with Linking Words
such
problems and come up with new ideas, people, on the other Linking Words
sidehand
, play an important role(sing count.) Correct your spelling
side hand
side and
to
care about not being extravagant Fix the infinitive
apply
wasteful
with resources and consuming them more efficiently.Correct word choice
and wasteful
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