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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Advanced and progressive system in farming is being grown. Even though ,yet, inhabitants of some countries around the world suffer from
food
 deprivation.
That is
 for many reasons
such
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sudden
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 increase in dwellers throughout the world and farmland
are
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is
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 not enough to satisfy people's
food
 demand. 47 Starvation has always
was
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 sparked
off
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considerable debate by those who are under occupation Around that. Meanwhile ,two major problems are being spread encountered concerned with going Hungry.
First
 ,in
developed
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a developed
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 society they always focus on their own country's progress in every
Fields
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 and
thus
, we can see extravagant sources which could be allocated to the communities Where
,
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living in poverty.
For example
,
such
 as
a
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 wasteful use of natural sources like water in
advanced
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an advanced
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 society . So it can bother other
civilization
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civilizations
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 living suitably.
Second
,
agriculture
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agricultural
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 land under cultivation
are
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is
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 faced with limitation due to population
inlargment
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enlargement
 growth and their demand for
food
. Now, two major problems for
food
 deprivation as mentioned above have to
considered
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 by Political will , government co-operation and
likewise
 people.
First
 of all, authorities'
Announcement
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around
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 starvation in countries must appear forcefully. It means
thatin
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that in
that
 other words,
,
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launching
campaign
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a campaign
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 for
this
 problem means
lack
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the lack
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 of
food
 in some parts of the world, creating
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a hashtag
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hashtag
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hashtags
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 with
This
 topic
in
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 their social media, or rising raising public awareness by giving
lecture
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lectures
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 concerned with
food
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the food
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problem
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problems
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in both schools and Universities.
Moreover
, land under cultivation as
it
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mentioned previously
are
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encountered
restriction
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restrictions
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 on
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the crop
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crop
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crops
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.
Although
, a good proposal could be submitted in
Near
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the Near
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 future as vertical farming. Which is the
the
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practice of growing
crop
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crops
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 in vertically stacked layers. With
this
 method, we expect increasing crop yields which
is
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 accompanied
with
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by a smaller unit area of land requirement. And
therefore
, it results in more
food
 and production. In conclusion,
although
 we can deal with
such
 problems and come up with new ideas, people, on the other
sidehand
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side hand
side and
, play an important role(sing count.)
to
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care about not being extravagant
wasteful
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and wasteful
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 with resources and consuming them more efficiently.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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