Advanced and progressive system in farming is being grown. Even though ,yet, inhabitants of some countries around the world suffer from
food
deprivation.
That is
for many reasons
such
As as
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increase in dwellers throughout the world and farmland
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not enough to satisfy people's
food
demand. 47
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considerable debate by those who are under occupation Around that. Meanwhile ,two major problems are being spread encountered concerned with going Hungry.
First
,in
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society
they always focus on their own country's progress in every
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and
thus
, we can see extravagant sources which could be allocated to the communities Where
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living in poverty.
For example
,
such
as
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wasteful use of natural sources like water in
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society . So it can bother other
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living suitably.
Second
,
agricultureReplace the word
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land under cultivation
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faced with limitation due to population
growth and their demand for
food
.
Now, two major problems for
food
deprivation as mentioned above have to
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by Political will , government co-operation and
likewise
people.
First
of all, authorities'
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aroundChange preposition
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starvation in countries must appear forcefully. It means
other words,
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launching
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for
this
problem means
lackCorrect article usage
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of
food
in some parts of the world, creating
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hashtagFix the agreement mistake
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with
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topic
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their social media, or rising raising public awareness by giving
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concerned with
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problem Fix the agreement mistake
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in both schools and Universities.
Moreover
, land under cultivation as
it Correct pronoun usage
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mentioned previously
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encountered
restrictionFix the agreement mistake
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on
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cropFix the agreement mistake
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.
Although
, a good proposal could be submitted in
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future as vertical farming. Which is the
the Remove the redundancy
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practice of growing
cropFix the agreement mistake
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in vertically stacked layers. With
this
method, we expect increasing crop yields which
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accompanied
with Change preposition
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by a smaller unit area of land requirement. And
therefore
, it results in more
food
and production.
In conclusion,
although
we can deal with
such
problems and come up with new ideas, people, on the other
, play an important role(sing count.)
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care about not being extravagant
wastefulCorrect word choice
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with resources and consuming them more efficiently.