The internet has vastly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?

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In the modern world, everyone surely has accepted that
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is part of our life. Accessing
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information
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has some cons and
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. What I believe is
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of
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has to have some restrictions. In another saying, I think that
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is entirely not a good thing that accessing the
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.
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thing
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I mention would be the security and
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reliability
when I hear
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. There is a massive hole of regulations and restrictions. It is just because of
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of laws. Technology has developed rapidly in
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decade and during
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rapid change, we were not able to see future circumstances to get prepared to well enough regulations. Nowadays, not having enough
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restrictions causes lots of trouble,
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especially
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our little ones.
Childeren
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Children
are not well aware of how to use
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Accidentaly
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Accidentally
pressing
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wrong button might be dangerous for their own security and
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,
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to my mind would be
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of
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might be not well enough to get. There is no
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justification
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to tell us whether the sources are reliable or not.
According
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having correct
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, we should be
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careful
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surfing on
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. There is
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I certainly have the desire to mention,
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during
our research on the
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, we may
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asked our personal
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. There are lots of
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on
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, as well as
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fields. Sharing personal
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might cause serious
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damage
to us. In
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conclusion
, reaching
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rapidly might
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to us,
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useful
.
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, when we take our
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consideration
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, reliability and security,
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the sound
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of using
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would change in a bad way. We should know that
accesing
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accessing
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is not to
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way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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