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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Disucss both these view and give your own opinions.

#people #films #phones #tablets #cinema #disucss
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Nowasday, technology has changed rapidly in a decade. Most
people
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 can consider to
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 their smartphone sand or tablets to watch films or go to
cinema
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 to enjoy their
movies
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. We would like to discuss these two different perspectives in the below paragraph. During the pandemic,
people
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 are forcesd to choose to have their entertainment at home. Because of using of smartphone to watch
movies
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 via Netflix, youtube and Disney Plus. It give us more flexible to consider our times priority without any time constraint.
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people
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 get
use
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 have Netflix or youtube. In modern cities, most
people
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 might need to work in long working hours, which create certain of difficulty to go to
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. While they have times to go the
cinema
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, the
movies
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 could not be on show anymore because of
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 might only be on show around 1 month.
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,
people
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 prefer to
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 their smartphone to watch some
movies
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 during their travelling time without any time constaint.
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,
people
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 might prefer to see movie in a
cinema
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. I do agree that some
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 might need to go to
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. Because of
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 provides better equipment including bigger screen, surround sound equipment and 4D
movies
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 that provides a better experience to enjoy their
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. The experience that cannot compare with watching
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 via tablet.
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: I might prefer to go to
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 to watch active
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.
Such
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 as: Spiderman, Superman. Going to the
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 that can make you feel more exictment. In my perspective, going to
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 might be kind of mixture consideration
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 depending on the nature of
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, times constaint. Personally, I would prefer to
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 tablet to watch some love story and I will still go to
cinema
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 to enjoy action
movies
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 that can give me a few hours break and relax from our daily life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effective
  • Technological advancements
  • Social outing
  • Immersive experience
  • Cinematic quality
  • Nostalgia
  • Tradition
  • Distractions
  • High-quality screens
  • Sound systems
  • Visual effects
  • Cinematography
  • Darkened environment
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