In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the days ahead, all cars, buses and trucks will drive on their own as the only persons travelling in these automobiles will be the passengers. I think the demerits of

this

technology exceed the merits as it will lead to

loss

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of jobs

of

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drivers

and

traffic

wardens.

Firstly

,

this

innovation leading to less

traffic

congestion is one of its advantages. In, that

vehicles

will be driven by artificial intelligence that has been programmed with the relevant

traffic

rules,

hence

, eliminating the human

behavior

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that causes unnecessary

congestions

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.

Secondly

, safer travels are ensured.

That is

, the cases of accidents recorded from drunken

drivers

and reckless driving will be reduced as

these artificial intelligence

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do not drink and have been well developed to drive within allowable speed limits.

For instance

, the fatal accident that occurred in Madagascar

last

year

as a result

of the overspeeding of the bus driver which led to the death of several people would have not happened if

this

technology was in use. Despite the benefits of

this

technology, it

also

comes with some drawbacks. In my opinion, I think these disadvantages outweigh

its

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advantages. Owing to the major attribute of

this

innovation which is driverless, a lot of people particularly employed

drivers

and

traffic

wardens will

be lose

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their jobs.

This

is due to the fact that the current job of the

drivers

will be taken over by

this

artificial intelligence.

Furthermore

, the need for

traffic

controllers will be eradicated as the

vehicles

will be programmed to obey

traffic

rules.

Also

, the fear that these

vehicles

may develop

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while

on

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in

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transit and might either leave their passengers stranded or even lead to unavoidable accidents is another setback. Due to the specific fact that these

vehicles

will be driven without human judgement.

For example

, in cases where it malfunctions, the impending disaster may be unavoidable. In conclusion, the plan of turning all

vehicles

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driverless with the only persons in them being the passengers

have

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its demerits exceeding the merits as there will be loss of jobs and unavoidable accidents.