Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs. Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett I am writing to express my interest in the advertisement you published

last

week in the Daily mail seeking someone to help you for a couple of hours every day

summer. I have been living on my own for the

last

3 years so believe I can help you with plenty of chores. Being a trained cook, I can lend you a hand with preparing meals and other kitchen chores.

In addition

to that, I can

also

help with house cleaning. I am a university student and as you are aware that education and cost of living are pretty expensive in Canada so in order to meet my expenses, I would like to work during my summer vacation. Your house is only 800m from my apartment which make it very convenient to commute. I can be available for up to 5 hours every day and my availability hours are pretty flexible except for 6 to 10 in the morning when I take a Yoga class with my friends. In the evenings, I go for Tennis practice but

that is

flexible so I can manage as per your requirements. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Hanna

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

201 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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