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At the present time the population of some countries include relatedly large number of young adults compared with the number of older people do it advantages of this solution outweigh the disadvantages

#time #population #countries #adults #people
Indus today's society some countries have
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acceleration in their inhabitants having
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 young population than the older
people
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boomer
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). no surprisingly ,young
people
 are more talented, full of vitality and possibly can do more dealing with the technology than elderly.
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 with the advantages ,probably a country's betterment in industry ,economy and so forth ,are more
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 workforce.
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mention ,young crowds have
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 understanding of new technology , since they are called
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digital-native or computer literate. Precisely ,someone who can work out the issues of a specific digital system or
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is updated with recent trends concerning modern technology is much more in demand for developed countries. As you know, the topic
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 immigration is a great
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 that
people
 can be admitted to an affluent country or a job position unless no being that match old.
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 ,countries
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positive growth in their young
people
 can apply an appropriate proposal :reducing expenditure
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 healthcare and putting a huge amount of that on providing basic infrastructures with their young crowds.
On the other hand
 ,
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, shifting trends in population in terms of growth of younger
people
 ,basically, bring some problems with themselves.
firstly
 ,the most outstanding feature would be facing with
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 workforce. To be more exact ,
although
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 approach in the workplace, they are more reliable and are
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a result of too
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 trial-and-error .As a matter of fact, it is a bit challenging
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 younger to apply the new approach and in parallel with we have to wait for these ideas whether works or not. Tackling
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 issue,
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would definitely
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 us
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progress in many aspects In conclusion,
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 the basis of
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 points, while
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 have years of experience ,younger coming will come with
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creativity with which any industry is brought about progress.
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