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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. What causes obesity and how can it be solved

#obesity #countries
Nowadays,
obesity
 has become a serious and extensively existed problem in numerous countries, especially in some developed nations,
such
 as America or
United
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of
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Kingdom. In
this
 essay, the causes of
obesity
 and
approuches
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approaches
 used to handle
with
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this
 problem would be discussed. In most
of
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rich
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the rich
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 countries,
excess
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an excess
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 supply of attractive food might be one of the
reason
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reasons
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of
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for
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obesity
. During the modern period, det to sufficient resources of raw materials of diel in these economies,
large
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a large
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 amount of their citizens can consume delicious food, which might contain
energy
that is
 more than what their
body
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bodies
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 required.
In addition
,
information
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the information
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 gap might be another reason, the producers and sellers may not willing to tell the ordinary how much
energy
 they should consume, and even though some experts publish it, there still are tons of people ignoring the hazard of consuming superfluous desserts or meat but enjoying them.
Nevertheless
,
obese
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an obese
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 problem caused by the reasons mentioned above could be handled by several measures.
For instance
, government or other responsible organisations can popularise the acceptable intake of
energy
 and harm of
obesity
,
such
 as
higher
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 probability of getting heart diseases, trying to encourage people to avoid
obesity
 voluntarily.
Furthermore
, propaganda
of
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about
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 fitness
also
 could be one of the measures, because moderate fitness can help
human
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humans
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to
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consume excess
energy
 and avoid fat accumulation, preventing
increasing
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the increasing
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 weight of people. In conclusion, the main causes of
obesity
 might be the excess
energy
 provided by
modern
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the modern
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 diet and asymmetric
informations
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information
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. To address
obese
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the obese
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 issue, appropriate measures could be the popularisation of
obese
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obesity
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 damage, recommendation of
energy
 intake, and the promotion of fitness, they could effectively slow down the spread of
obesity
in
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to
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 a certain
extend
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.
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