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I have been living in

Perth

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for two and half years when I went there for a working holiday. Due to COVID-19, the Western Australia Government had a controlled border in a place where I couldn’t go anywhere and had to stay in

Perth

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. Before I

came

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Perth

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, I lived in Hong Kong which is one of the most densely populated areas in the world. I would like to live here because

Perth

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's population is fewer than Hong

Kong

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Kong's

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, if I take a bus, we won’t always stand shoulder to shoulder on the bus.

On the other hand

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, the WA government is one of the best controlled

the

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COVID-19 in the world.

However

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, I get more anxiety when driving because I fear I am going to hurt myself or other people

that is

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why I have to keep my mind on driving and I couldn’t talk with passengers when I was driving on

the

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strange roads. In the conclusion, the WA government would improve their public transport system, I would prefer to take public transport rather than driving my own car.

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Jun 12, 2022

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1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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183 words

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