Some people say that the man environmental problem off our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the environmental

problem

is getting more critical and

cause

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many negative

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to

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our planet. Some

people

suggest that the

extinctions

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extinction

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of specific

animals

and plants

is

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the main

problem

, whereas others argue that there

have

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more

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a more

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significant

issue

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issues

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which

need

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to be solved. In

this

essay, I will briefly explain both sides of

views

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and give my own opinion.

First

of all, it is true that there are many specific species extinct every year. Due to many reasons including deforestation, pollution and carbon emissions, those

animals

and plants lost their habitat. They need to remove to other places from their original surrounding,

however

, it is not a simple way for them to adapt to a new place.

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, the polar bear, which

live

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in

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at

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North

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Pole, is facing

this

problem

for a long time. If

the

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global warming

get

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worse, the ice which in

North

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Pole will melt completely

when

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as

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time

pass

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by.

On the other hand

, the environmental

problem

not only

influence

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animals

and plants' living quality but

also

humans. As

people

destroying

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the circumstance where

animals

live, there are damaging the surrounding where they live too.

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,

the

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extreme weather

cause

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severe

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natural

disaster

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like flood, mudslide and drought. Those affect financial systems and

also

people'

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life.

Although

there are many

organization

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organizations

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that try

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try

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to prevent our Earth, some

people

still can not

aware

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of the consequence.

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,

the

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natural resources like fossil

fuel

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fuels

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are getting

more poor

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, so

people

need to find out other alternative

fuel

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fuels

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. To sum up, it seems that environmental

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exacerbate many difficulties

to

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humans and other species. I think it is not fair to judge

that

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which

problem

is more essential. From where I stand, the public need to put more

of

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an emphasis on every environmental

problem

.