Old people get bored after retirement. Explain the causes and solutions.
The elderly usually feel bored after they are retired. The main reason for
this
is that after leaving work they have much more free time
and do not know how to spend it. A viable solution is to organise
special meetings for the old people
, where they can share their interests and do something that is
in common for all of them.
After working hard all their lives, people
in their 60s retire and usually cannot understand what to do in the morning, where to go in the afternoon and how to spend the evening. Obviously, this
great difference between completely different lives is the main cause of the problem. After busy working days during
several Change preposition
for
decades
you are free for the rest of your life. Add a comma
,decades
For instance
, in 2020 Cambridge University conducted a research on why old people
get bored. The result was surprising and simple at the same time
. They just do not know how to organise
their time
.
A possible solution to this
difficult situation can be arranging meetings and clubs for people
over 60. The retirement
is the best Correct article usage
Retirement
time
to start communicating more with other people
, to develop skills that you could not develop earlier because of lack of time
. Such
clubs can create new friendship
, improve Fix the agreement mistake
friendships
Add an article
the relationship
relationship
between Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
people
and make them feel necessary for the
society. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, there is a local orchestra in my town. It consists of people
who have already retired. They are amators
, but they successfully give concerts twice or more times per year. They can even raise money for charity Correct your spelling
amateurs
selling
tickets to their concerts. I believe Change preposition
by selling
this
is a truly wonderful way to spend your time
after retirement.
In conclusion, some people
who are 60 or more find their life boring after leaving work. The reason is that these people
are used to living busy
life and cannot Add an article
a busy
organise
properly their time
for there is too much of it comparing
to their previous lives. And the great solution would be to Change the form of the verb
compared
organise
clubs for elderly people
where they could do things that they like together, talk to each other and feel happy.Submitted by sonyashpyniova on
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