Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Artists ,

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like other people, need to work hard to survive on the income they receive from selling their

works

. Some kinds of artists achieve success very fast, charging a lot of money for their products or work, some of them try hard for

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long term ,

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and have

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a lot of defeats before becoming popular. Several got their recognition after death (

for instance

Vincent van Gogh ) while most never reached success and

nobody

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knew them. Unfortunately, I think that the

government

can do nothing about it. Usually, people prefer to pay for things that they admire and would like to own. If we are talking about pictures, the price will

be depend

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on

name

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the name

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of the author, how many times his\her

works

were

exhibits

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, in what genre and how

skillful

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works

were rated. In the free market, because most

works

are somehow unique, the

government

can’t take part in price regulation.

This

also

applies to other branches of art

such

as sculptures, literature and music. Everybody can ask the price for their work as they want. Unfortunately, for the most

part

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nowadays artists shall be businessmen to promote their

works

. And they need to keep an eye on the market to understand

tendency

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and take responsibility

in

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own

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hands. In my

opinion

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There

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is

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not many ways how

government

can help unknown creators.

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government

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the government

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can help with

organization

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the organization

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of charity

exhibition

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exhibitions

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or fairs to force

works

of infamies

creative

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people. In

conclusion

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I can say that

this

question isn't as easy as many may think at

first

. And probably has more non-standard or even unexpected variations of solution. But

government

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the government

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doesn’t need to engage in

case

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the case

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of a free market. Creators shall find new ways of their representation.