Some people think that living in a country is essential to learn that country’s language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The
chart
gives us the information about the
Bulgarians
citizen emigration in 2001 and 2006 and the reasons for
such
decision. Most
Bulgarians
aged between 15-60 had no intention to move abroad for travelling or staying abroad in the
year
2006 with 73 per
cent
and in the
year
2001 statistic from the
chart
shows a similar situation with a small difference going down only to 3 per
cent
(70 per
cent
) of the same
category
of the population. Ten per
cent
of the
people
from Bulgaria aged 15-60 travelled to other countries as visitors in the
year
2001 ,
However
just 6 per
cent
from the similar
category
of the Bulgarian society had the same intention in the
year
2006. according to the
chart
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just nine per
cent
of the
people
group 15-60 age who live in Bulgaria moved abroad to live for a short time in the 2006
year
while in the 2001
year
only 5 per
cent
went outside for the same reason. Another intention of the Bulgarian emigration which was in 2006 is to work abroad and
then
return with 4 per
cent
from
people
aged 15-60 while in 2001 the percentage is higher with 3 per
cent
(7 per
cent
). In the
category
of
people
intending to live abroad permanently the
chart
shows the same percentage in both years with 8 per
cent
. In general, the higher
category
in the
year
2001 and in the
year
2006 was the
Bulgarians
with no intentions to go abroad and the lowest
category
in 2001 were
people
who lived abroad for short time and in 2006
Bulgarians
who went abroad to work and
then
return.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • acquisition
  • nuances
  • idiomatic expressions
  • context
  • global connectivity
  • cultural programs
  • media consumption
  • firsthand experience
  • frequent opportunities
  • substantial understanding
  • cultural shock
  • alternative methods
  • viable options
  • natural interaction
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