Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent travelling to work is to replace

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and

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close to the

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centre with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. In my opinion, I firmly disagree with

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notion. The green public spaces have a

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of benefits to the

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that I will explain in the following paragraph. On the one hand, the

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is confronted with an overpopulation problem. It makes time spent travelling to work from traffic congestion. There are a

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of various types to solve problems.

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, The government's cooperative strategy with private companies to gain work from home time more than today.

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, The government should improve the standard of public transport due to inviting citizens to reduce the number of private cars in the street.

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, I firmly disagree to replace green areas in the metropolitan to apartment buildings.

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and

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have a

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of benefits.

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,

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place can relax lifestyles from the stress of in living the

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. At the weekend,

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and

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in my

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can make music performances and a floor dancing. It's a good vibe place.

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,

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place should support elderly people to exercise.

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, The Chatuchak park is open daily at 5.00 a.m. and elderly people are doing exercise.

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, Green areas reduce the carbon footprint in the

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because they have a

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of trees to absorb the CO2. In conclusion, I surely believe that

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and

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are necessary for cities and I unsupport to replacing them with an apartment

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