Countries are becoming mor and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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the age of globalization, nations around the world are increasingly getting similar as
people
can purchase an identical product in each location of the globe. Due to the cultural and economic consequences that
this
practice might have on local
people
, it would appear to be a negative development.
Firstly
, the afore-mention trend can affect local cultures negatively.
This
is because with the expansion of international companies presenting
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variety of products like customs and shoes, accompanied by persuasive methods of advertisement local
people
are likely to be impressed and
thus
tend to purchase clothing items other than ones that represent their local identity.
consequently
, a
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appearance, which is a great representative of its ethnic identity, would be replaced by universal uniforms, resulting in
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crisis in the long term.
Moreover
, globalisation in many cases would lead to
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monopoly of a handful of transnational companies like Adidas and Nike that try to get complete control over the local markets in many countries worldwide. The domination of large companies can marginalize or even eradicate local small businesses, resulting in mass unemployment or even poverty in some cases.
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might
initially
seem beneficial for governments due to the huge amount of tax that they pay to states, it can ultimately deter a nation’s productivity and prosperity. In conclusion, the ubiquity of some products that
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people
to purchase the same commodity in any part of the world, which results in gradual
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similarity can be considered a harmful trend on the basis of its serious cultural and economic drawbacks for locals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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